1.The baby si the first person who is ever completely belonged to her.2.We are shown in the early part of this movie a world of grace,plenty and pleasure and one who is already doomed.3.Do you remember the cliff which you first saw me in Monte Carlo.

1.The baby si the first person who is ever completely belonged to her.2.We are shown in the early part of this movie a world of grace,plenty and pleasure and one who is already doomed.3.Do you remember the cliff which you first saw me in Monte Carlo.
1.The baby si the first person who is ever completely belonged to her.
2.We are shown in the early part of this movie a world of grace,plenty and pleasure and one who is already doomed.
3.Do you remember the cliff which you first saw me in Monte Carlo.
4.She stood there laughing and told me all about herself,that I'll never tell a living soul.
5.It was so rude of me not to let you know I was making a hasty departure,but a cable came this morning ,in which announced that my daughter is engaged to be married.
6.Days later,newly recovered from the unexpected fall,as resulted in a miscarriage,she sits in a chair on a balcony.
7.I never dress up.That is the one privilege to which I claim as the host of a costume ball.
8.Now I have a little note here I consider puts that possibility quite out of court.I can assure you that it is not the note of a woman who intends to drown herself that same night.
9.While she was undressing,she'd tell me about the party she'd been to.She was the life and soul of any party because she knew everyone mattered and loved her.
10.This is a story about a young lawyer in his early days at the Bar when he represented a railway company,one of which vehicles had run down a boy.

1.The baby si the first person who is ever completely belonged to her.2.We are shown in the early part of this movie a world of grace,plenty and pleasure and one who is already doomed.3.Do you remember the cliff which you first saw me in Monte Carlo.
1.he baby is the first person who has ever completely belonged to her.
2.We are shown in the early part of this movie a world of grace,plenty of pleasure and one who is already doomed.
3.Do you remember the cliff when you first saw me in Monte Carlo.
4.She stood there laughing and told me all about herself,which I'll never tell a living soul.
5.It was so rude of me not to let you know I was making a hasty departure,but a cable came this morning ,in which announced that my daughter would engaged to be married.
6.Days later,newly recovered from the unexpected fall,as resulted in a miscarriage,she sits in a chair on a balcony.
7.I've never been dressed up.That is the one privilege to which I claim as the host of a costume ball.
8.Now I have a little note here I consider putting that possibility quite out of court.I can assure you that it is not the note of a woman who intends to drown herself that same night.
9.While she was undressing,she'd tell me about the party she'd been to.She was the life and soul of any party because she knew everyone who mattered and loved her.
10.This is a story about a young lawyer in his early days at the Bar when he represented a railway company,one of whose vehicles had run down a boy.
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1，who后面的is去掉
2,one前面加the
3,which变为who
4,told变成telling
5,去掉which前的in
6,recovered变为recovering
7,one去掉
8，puts变putting
9, mattered前加who
10,which变whose

1.第二个is改成was
2.结尾的who改成which
3.整句改成:Do you remember the cliff which you saw me in Monte Carlo for the first time? "you first saw me"句型错误
4."She stood there laughing"改成"she stood there to ...

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1.第二个is改成was
2.结尾的who改成which
3.整句改成:Do you remember the cliff which you saw me in Monte Carlo for the first time? "you first saw me"句型错误
4."She stood there laughing"改成"she stood there to laugh"
5.最后的小句第一个词in去掉
6."she sits in a chair on a balcony."改成"she sat in a chair on a balcony."
7."That is the one"改成"That is the only"
8.puts换成putting
9."she'd tell"改成"she told"
10.which vehicles 改成whose vehicle

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