谢谢帮我检查一下作文《New Year`s Resolution》New Year`s Resolution2007 is over,and 2008 is coming.Of course,I`m going to make some New Year`s Resotutions.In the new year,I`m going to study harder and harder.First I`m going to try to study
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![谢谢帮我检查一下作文《New Year`s Resolution》New Year`s Resolution2007 is over,and 2008 is coming.Of course,I`m going to make some New Year`s Resotutions.In the new year,I`m going to study harder and harder.First I`m going to try to study](/uploads/image/z/4144262-14-2.jpg?t=%E8%B0%A2%E8%B0%A2%E5%B8%AE%E6%88%91%E6%A3%80%E6%9F%A5%E4%B8%80%E4%B8%8B%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87%E3%80%8ANew+Year%60s+Resolution%E3%80%8BNew+Year%60s+Resolution2007+is+over%2Cand+2008+is+coming.Of+course%2CI%60m+going+to+make+some+New+Year%60s+Resotutions.In+the+new+year%2CI%60m+going+to+study+harder+and+harder.First+I%60m+going+to+try+to+study)
谢谢帮我检查一下作文《New Year`s Resolution》New Year`s Resolution2007 is over,and 2008 is coming.Of course,I`m going to make some New Year`s Resotutions.In the new year,I`m going to study harder and harder.First I`m going to try to study
谢谢帮我检查一下作文《New Year`s Resolution》
New Year`s Resolution
2007 is over,and 2008 is coming.Of course,I`m going to make some New Year`s Resotutions.In the new year,I`m going to study harder and harder.First I`m going to try to study science better.Because I think my science achievement is very terrible.I have work harder.And I`m going to do exercise more to keep fit and to be taller.Now I`m start playing tennis.I want to play it well.Finally I hope our life becomes more and more happy..I will learn writing with my left hand during the next year
谢谢帮我检查一下作文《New Year`s Resolution》New Year`s Resolution2007 is over,and 2008 is coming.Of course,I`m going to make some New Year`s Resotutions.In the new year,I`m going to study harder and harder.First I`m going to try to study
倒数第二句和倒数第一句换一下位置,倒数第二句是总结的句子.Finally就不要动了,改为“ Finally I will learn writing with my left hand during the next year.I hope our lives becomes more and more happily.”.
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划横线的地方是语法错误.(已经帮你改过来了^_^)
另外,缩写符号是“'”,例I'm zdlpt.
整篇文章写得不错,继续努力!\(^o^)/