作业帮July 20.2012Dear ChapmanI represent out Board of Dalian Daxin Chemical Corparation intite you to com to our Corparation Tenth anniversary e
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July 20.2012Dear ChapmanI represent out Board of Dalian Daxin Chemical Corparation intite you to com to our Corparation Tenth anniversary e
July 20.2012
Dear Chapman
I represent out Board of Dalian Daxin Chemical Corparation intite you to com to our Corparation Tenth anniversary events .The events time is from August 1st to August 3rd ,and we will also arrange a meeting between you and our general manager to bargaining something about next year's cooperation matter .
If you would attend we will be deeply horoner.
yous,
Amber
第一次接触这种邀请信,不清楚是不是这种格式,请帮忙修改,另外,请和鄙人详细讲解下,关于办公室一类的通知,公告的格式应该怎么写,发表你的意见：你觉得这篇作文过关吗?冲二级够不够格?
题目要求为 代表大连新化学药品公司董事会邀请Mr.Chapman来本公司参加10周年纪念活动，时间从8月1~3号同同时告诉他将安排一次他与总经理的见面会谈，商讨双方来年的合作事宜。
July 20.2012Dear ChapmanI represent out Board of Dalian Daxin Chemical Corparation intite you to com to our Corparation Tenth anniversary e
这样的文章冲二级略难啊
邀请信的格式基本正确,但要冲二级的话,文章中还应多一些定语从句,比如：The reason why our company invite you is that…… 多一些复合句,少一些简单句
文章的格式相对来说不是那么重要,关键要看文中的高级词汇量和复合句式量
这篇文章还需进一步修改
希望你能采纳,谢谢!