求短文纠错.下面这篇短文,读过后纠错,改正不改正随意.Dear Meng.First I need clear up about i like you this thing.Listening,That's only like!Not love,I admit that I had like you,Might as well tell you.I need a girl who can accompan

求短文纠错.下面这篇短文,读过后纠错,改正不改正随意.Dear Meng.First I need clear up about i like you this thing.Listening,That's only like!Not love,I admit that I had like you,Might as well tell you.I need a girl who can accompan
求短文纠错.
下面这篇短文,读过后纠错,改正不改正随意.
Dear Meng.
First I need clear up about i like you this thing.Listening,That's only like!Not love,I admit that I had like you,Might as well tell you.I need a girl who can accompany my life-long,So I won't have a aurtship easily.
Second,what i like is your shy,but you changed now,didn't give my feeling before.
Finally ,I'll tell you sense of love,If i'm in love,That girl must be my wife,and never change,It's only a girl in my life,Thanks for your love,If you love my enough,I hope you can wait for me.
yours.
总感觉很多地方不连贯不像是句子.
初中弟弟的作文拿来检查检查.

求短文纠错.下面这篇短文,读过后纠错,改正不改正随意.Dear Meng.First I need clear up about i like you this thing.Listening,That's only like!Not love,I admit that I had like you,Might as well tell you.I need a girl who can accompan
Dear Meng,
Firstly I need to clear up about the truth that I like you.Please pay attention that I just like instead of loving.I admit that I have liked you,Might as well tell you.I need a girl who can accompany me life-long,So I won't have a aurtship easily.
Secondly,what i like is your shyness,but you have changed now so that I don't have the affection anymore.
Finally ,I'll tell you the sense of love.If i'm in love,the girl must be my wife in the future.There should be only a girl in my life.Thanks for your love.If you love me enough,I hope you can wait for me.
yours.

你弟弟这是作文还是拒绝求爱的信哪？小小年纪……真是不得了。

Dear Bob: Thanks（加上for) writing and introducing your beautiful city to me. Now I'd like to tell you anything (anything改为something)about

Dear Meng.
First I need clear up about the thing that I like you.Listen,That's only like（like做名词的意思是“爱好，喜好”的意思，这句话要改，要不换词，要不换句“I just like you”）!but it is not love,I admit that I like you, but I m...

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Dear Meng.
First I need clear up about the thing that I like you.Listen,That's only like（like做名词的意思是“爱好，喜好”的意思，这句话要改，要不换词，要不换句“I just like you”）!but it is not love,I admit that I like you, but I might as well tell you,I need a girl who can accompany my life-long（这里用life就可以了）,So I won't have a aurtship(你弟弟自己造的词吧。。。无语) easily.
Second, what I like is your shyness,but you have changed now,you can not give me the feeling that you had before.
Finally ,I'll tell you what is love in my opinion,If I were in love（这里用虚拟语气，因此用“were”）,the girl who I love must be my wife,and I'll never change my love,you are only a girl in my life,Thanks for your love, If you really love me,I hope you can wait for me.
yours.
仅仅改了一下不对的地方，没有掺假个人见解。。。
顺便说一句，小小孩还是好好学习吧，不要早恋啊，要不后悔的是自己。。。

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这里不是程序吗？怎么英文的来了？
百思不得其解。。。。